http://talon.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] talon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rayaso 2014-06-03 12:47 am (UTC)

I thought the framing around this story was really well done — it's a great example of a story-within-a-story, that doesn't feel like it loses sight of either. Well done!

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