I would love to know what your idea was! I'm glad you enjoyed mine. I hope I didn't mess up any of the Oz details. You should google the Dorothy museum in Liberal. It's really cheesy. And they hold an Ozfest every 2 years. You can't make up stuff like this. I couldn't figure out how to end the story - I was going to end it with Ray smiling after the brick turns yellow, implying that he got his wish, but I just wasn't happy with it.