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rayaso ([personal profile] rayaso) wrote2017-01-06 09:29 am

Season 10, Week 4

Topic: “I don't skate to where the puck is. I skate to where the puck is going to be.”


IN SEARCH OF A FRIEND

It was a beautiful day in the park.  Families were having picnics, lovers were strolling hand in hand, and runners were almost enjoying running.   But then there was Handihr.  Handihr was roller skating as fast as he could, which was actually rather slow, and brushing into as many people as possible.   Since he was squat, with a hard, knobby skin and a tail, he was especially irritating, which was the whole idea.

The object was to touch as many people as possible without knocking them over.  “Go troll go!” his friends would shout.  The game made the victims angry, which made Handihr feel bad, but not bad enough to stop.  He was a teenage troll, after all.

This Saturday, Handihr was on a mission, actually three missions, but they were closely related.  Handihr needed to get away from his parents, seriously avoid his homework, and find Puck, his elf friend, who would help with the first two.
 

“Where’s Puck?” thought Handihr.  “I heard he might hang out here today.  He’s been so busy!”

Handihr had already skated by the fountain, the food trucks, and the swimming pool (where the girls sunned themselves, so he'd taken some extra time looking there).

“Maybe Puck changed plans,” Handihr thought.

People thought their friendship was odd, but Handihr and Puck had grown up together, and even though he was a troll while Puck was an elf, it had worked for them, even now, in high school.

Puck – tall and fast -- played basketball, while Handihr used his powerful body on the offensive line of the school’s football team.  Puck was going to be a success, you could tell just by looking at him, but Handihr was going to blunder through life, slamming doors and banging into things.

“Maybe Puck’s working out at the gym,” Handihr thought with a little jealousy.  The Alta Mira was new, and really nice.  “I wish I could just call him.”

Handihr’s parents had taken away his phone after that last report card.  “I guess I’ll have to skate over there.”

Handihr’s bicycle was useless.  Its front wheel had been bent when he had tried to ride off the school roof into the pool and had missed.  By a lot.  That had also cost him his driver’s license for three months.  “If we can’t trust you with a bike, how can we trust you with a car?” his father had said.

Still, it had been worth trying, even though Puck couldn’t watch it.  Grndskaw, the cutest troll at school, had been there – he’d made sure of that -- and she had rushed over to see if he was ok.

When Grndskaw had bent over him, Handihr had peeked down her blouse and the sight of her red wool bra had made the whole disaster a success after all.

Puck had said later that this was as close as he would ever get to her, and they had laughed.

“A troll can still dream,” Handihr sighed, before nearly skating into a lamppost.

“Puck just left,” the girl at the entrance to the gym told him.  Handihr could see past the desk to people struggling to lift pretty chrome weights that he could lift with one arm and barely notice.

Puck had once told Handihr he couldn’t take him to the gym as a guest because he was so strong he’d wreck the equipment.  Handihr smiled when he thought about it, but still wished Puck had at least taken him inside.

“I should think like Puck,” thought Handihr.  “I can’t keep following him around on these skates.”

He knew that wouldn’t work, though. “There’s no way I can think like an elf,” he admitted to himself.  The sun was starting to set and the day was wasting away.

It had been a long day, even for a troll.  “I’m getting tired.  There’s one last place to try – the hideout.” 

There was an abandoned lot next to the junior high, and in the middle was a huge, hollow tree stump.  When they climbed in, no one could see them -- it was their thinking place.

The old tree stump smelled musty from the decaying leaves on the ground, which made a soft cushion.  “It smells like perfume.  A girl’s been here,” he thought, “an elf girl.”  Elves always smelled so light and fresh.  “Not like trolls -- we smell like rock and earth.”  Handihr also detected Puck.  A troll’s keen senses were not always good to have.

Handihr sat down to rest as the light started to fade.  He thought about all the good times he’d had with Puck in the hideout, including the time Handihr had shown Puck that he could flatten a soda can in one hand.  Other, less welcome, thoughts crowded in until it became dark.

“I’m not quick like Puck,” thought Handihr at last, “but the train always gets to the station.”  He finally suspected what was happening, why Puck hadn’t been around much, and Handihr’s shoulders drooped.  He needed to talk to Puck about it.

It was less than a mile to Puck’s house.  The street lights were on, and Handihr felt like walking, with the skates slung over his shoulder.  His steps were slow and heavy.

Puck’s house was beautiful at night with the lights on, showing the lush landscaping.  Handihr knew every room.  Puck’s bedroom was on the second floor in the back.

As Handihr went up the graceful gravel walk, he could hear music and voices.  He heard laughter from Puck and a few other kids, including a couple of girl elves.

He didn’t knock on the door; he just stood there.  He had figured out at last that Puck was growing away from him, but he hadn’t counted on this.  Turning his back, Handihr’s big hands came quickly to his face and his broad shoulders shook.   “Puck doesn’t want to be my friend anymore,” he grieved, “and I didn’t even know it.”

After a few minutes, Handihr finally straightened up and began trudging back down the path, heading home.

He’d talk to his parents tonight, and probably do some homework.   Might as well stop avoiding it, at least for a while.

“I’ll go back to the park tomorrow -- maybe some friends will be there,” he thought, smiling hopefully.

"And if I'm really lucky, maybe Grndskaw will be at the pool.  This time I’ll talk to her, I swear."

Puck, he realized, was not the only one who could change.

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A special thanks to [livejournal.com profile] halfshellvenus for beta reading this.

[identity profile] i-17bingo.livejournal.com 2017-01-07 10:28 am (UTC)(link)
Aw! Poor Handihr! But there was something in his optimism toward the end that was encouraging. He does need to get away from Puck.

Nice use of the prompt, by the way.

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-07 03:17 pm (UTC)(link)
It's sad, but sometimes friendships end before one friend is ready, and sometimes people (or trolls) find out in painful ways. But Handihr is ready to change, and if he only talks to Grndskaw, I'm sure he'd be surprised. It's not every troll who rushes to your aid after you've ridden your bicycle off a roof, especially one wearing a red wool bra.

[identity profile] bleodswean.livejournal.com 2017-01-07 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
AW!!!! I so needed this light-hearted and upbeat and yet wholly realistic story about a troll who is beginning to figure out the way to play the game of life. This was just wonderful and not a single word or sentence out of place. I adored every single sentiment and now am feeling quite fond of Handihr!

This had me chortling - When Grndskaw had bent over him, Handihr had peeked down her blouse and the sight of her red wool bra had made the whole disaster a success after all. Red. Wool. Bra. HAHAHAHAHA!! How DO you live a calm life with those dastardly brains inside your head, G?

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-07 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you liked it. Friendships come and go for a variety of reasons, but sometimes one friend simply outgrows the other. Kids do not mature at the same rate. One day, girls are more interesting than roller skates and bicycle stunts, and the more mature friend can be a little embarrassed to be seen with the less mature friend. People drift apart. I must give appropriate credit for the red wool bra. It was originally red lace, but [livejournal.com profile] halfshellvenus suggested wool, since Grndskaw was a troll.

[identity profile] kajel.livejournal.com 2017-01-08 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah Handirh, growing up can be difficult. I really enjoyed this story.

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-08 04:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Growing up is hard, even for teen trolls. Teen elves have it pretty easy, though.

[identity profile] marlawentmad.livejournal.com 2017-01-09 12:01 am (UTC)(link)

Ah, this is so bittersweet!

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-09 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
Yes -- I'm glad you liked it.

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-09 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] penpusher.livejournal.com 2017-01-09 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
Another winner! I was wondering why a troll would be wearing a red wool bra, but of course! Stopping all those goats on the bridges... what else would be the appropriate fabric! Awesome stuff.

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-09 01:54 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you -- I'm glad you enjoyed it! If you were a hot young girl troll, what else would you wear beside the finest in wool bras?

[identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com 2017-01-09 09:48 pm (UTC)(link)
but Handihr was going to blunder through life, slamming doors and banging into things.
The inevitability of life for an ungraceful creature, but given the typical troll personality... ultimately, he'll come to revel in it anyway.

“If we can’t trust you with a bike, how can we trust you with a car?”
Hahaha-- fair point!

I feel bad for poor Handihr, losing his friend, but once he grows up a little more, it may not even be permanent. :)

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 02:34 pm (UTC)(link)
I thought that Puck and Handihr would no longer be best friends, but remain friendly, and then go off to their separate lives. Handihr may bang around in life, but he's basically a friendly troll who will do well.

[identity profile] n8tastrophe.livejournal.com 2017-01-09 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha! Puck! I get it!

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes - I stole his name from A Midsummer's Night Dream. If you're going to be an elf, you might as well have a Shakespearean name as well as a hockey puck.

[identity profile] mamas-minion.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
I love the story and love your take on the prompt. it is too bad trolls and elves cannot even be friends in a fantasy world. Alas poor Handihr, but maybe he will be able to impress Grndskaw and I am sure that will make him forget about Puck!

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! In the end, Handihr gets the girl. After all, she rushed over to help him after his bicycle fiasco.

[identity profile] eternal-ot.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 08:26 am (UTC)(link)
Aww...<3 Poor Handihr. Lovely take on the prompt. Loved the setting and the characters. And I hope you get back to this world someday; I want to know whether Handihr could impress Grndskaw or did Puck get back with Handihr ?

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thought that Handihr would win the heart of Grndskaw and remain friends with Puck, just not the close friendship they had in the past.

[identity profile] sinnamongirl.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 09:08 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely take on the prompt!

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] magazhchi.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 07:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I enjoyed reading this. Interesting world of elves and trolls. Hope there is more.

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 07:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you liked it!

[identity profile] dee-aar2.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Aaaaw ... Handihr gets my attention and empathies too. Life of a troll isn't easy as well I realise. And not to mention having to come across the red woollen bra right in your face .... woollen ??? Did he really have to lose Puck ... ?

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 09:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course trolls wear woolen bras - they have tough and knobby skin. My thought was that Handihr doesn't completely lose Puck, but they're no longer best friends. On the plus side, Handihr gets Grndskaw.

[identity profile] my-name-is-jenn.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, it's hard when you realize you and your friend are drifting apart.

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-11 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
Yes it it. It has probably happened to all of us, and it's never easy.

[identity profile] cheapxdate.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 10:39 pm (UTC)(link)
As someone who took the prompt very literal, it's so interesting to see this kind of take on it. There's something super whimsical about this world you've created and it leaves me wanting more. Even in such a short space, you've made Puck and Handihr super endearing!

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! That's very kind of you.

[identity profile] encrefloue.livejournal.com 2017-01-10 11:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Wistful and whimsical! Such a fun read. Great job with making Handihr so relatable.

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-11 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I thought that most of us have either outgrown or been outgrown by a friend, and it is never easy.

[identity profile] murielle.livejournal.com 2017-01-17 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Handihr! What a great story! Excellent use of a difficult prompt, at least it was for me. (Smile)

[identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com 2017-01-17 06:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for taking the time to go back and read this. I thought it was a difficult prompt as well -- the last few have been hard, which, I assume, Gary wants. Still, an easy one would be nice!

[identity profile] murielle.livejournal.com 2017-01-17 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
This week I am going to try just working down the list (for the most part) and hope I get through them all. I'm such a slow reader. If sloths could read, they'd be faster than I am. (Half grin)