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MIRROR, MIRROR

Have you ever found something after you stopped looking for it? I am a finder of magical antiquities – for a fee, of course – and this happened to me during a recent job. But I wish I had never taken this assignment, because, for the first time, I had to leave an artifact behind. It was just too dangerous.

I have an unusual job, but I’m a legitimate finder – no theft, no frauds, and no scams. If I can’t verify the piece or the owner doesn’t want to sell it, fine. I may have a disappointed client, but I work on a retainer, so I still get my per diem and expenses. It’s a solitary job, with lots of travel, cheap motels and bad food, but it suits me. Some people just aren’t meant to have normal lives.

I had just started tracking a dragon’s egg for a collector when it happened. I had been searching a long time for the Magic Mirror (you know the one – “mirror, mirror on the wall . . . .”), but had yet to find it. The Magic Mirror was special. Not only could it show you who was the fairest of them all, but it could show you the past and, most importantly, the future. My client was a hedge-fund manager who thought it would give him an investing advantage. I didn’t like his motives, but he paid well, with a ridiculous bonus for success.

After months of chasing rumors, speculation, and wild guesses, finances forced me to move on to a different case and find the dragon’s egg. I didn’t give up on the mirror because I never quit, but I needed a break. I had traced the egg to an old couple living in Nebraska, and went there to get it. While I was driving through the heartland of America, I spotted the Grimm Brothers’ Traveling Fairy-Tale Circus off in the distance. That looked promising. The dragon’s egg would have to wait.

There were seven battered trucks parked off the highway in an old fairground, just south of the small farming town of Grantsville, Nebraska. The sad little caravan was all that was left of the Fairy-Tale Circus. It looked like the trucks must have just arrived, because the Seven Dwarfs were still setting up the main tent, but there was no whistling while they worked. Aging shadows of their former selves, the Three Little Pigs were slowly assembling their booths of straw, wood, and brick, while the Big Bad Wolf was starting dinner in a big pot.

Prince Charming, Snow White, Rapunzel, and the members of the Royal Entourage (“Your Photo With A Star, Only $5.00! Autographs Extra.”) were sitting around the camp fire, mending their costumes. They looked as if they belonged in a rest home, not out on the road.

The years had taken their toll, and now that they were no longer sustained by imagination, the troupe was reaching The End. The death of Once Upon A Time was near, and few would mourn its passing, although I would be one of them. It hadn’t always been like this, of course, but modern life had been hard on fairy tales.

I started to wander around. No one seemed to care, since today’s curiosity seeker might be tomorrow’s customer, and both had been in short supply. That was when I finally found the mirror.

It was in a dirty tent, and it didn’t look like much. The mirror had been sought by kings and queens, coveted by mighty wizards, and questioned by evil sisters. At times encrusted with precious jewels, the mirror was now spotted and dusty, with the barest of wood frames.

The sun-bleached sign outside the old tent read:

Magic Mirror!
Questions Answered!
Know the Future!
$10.00 for 3 Questions.

The tent was empty except for a mirror perched on an easel next to a small table with a wooden donation box on top of it. A sign read, “Deposit $10 Before Asking Questions and Be Careful!” After I paid, the mirror began to glow a sickening green with swirls of blue, and in the center red letters appeared, spinning randomly like a tornado and growing larger until they filled the mirror. The thing was either magical or a great screen saver. The letters finally stopped:

To lords and ladies I sing
Of what is past, or passing, or to come
.

My mouth was dry – at last, this might be the true Magic Mirror!

“What if you’re not a lord or lady? What happens then?" I asked.

That’s two questions.
I answer peasants’ questions for $10.
But I do not sing.
Ask your last question.

"You’re kidding! My last question?"

Yes.
Thank you for your donation.

The lights died and the mirror went blank. I had fallen for one of the oldest tricks in fortune-telling – “Be careful” – really? I thought hard about my next questions and paid another $10. The mirror glowed, and the letters swirled and formed new words:

You again?
Ask your three questions.

"How do I know you’re the real Magic Mirror from the fairy tales?"

Time will tell.

“'Time will tell?' What kind of an answer is that?"

Two questions again.
Yes.
A correct one.

This was getting expensive, but I needed verification, so I made yet another donation. The mirror swirled, although this time it drew a laughing clown’s face, and I hated clowns. I continued anyway. I wanted the mirror to prove it could see the past.

“Show me my first kiss.”

Here it is.

An image appeared. “That’s my mother kissing me just after I was born!”

I was mad, but the mirror was right, and at least I knew it could see the past – and now for the present.

“Why am I here?”
To buy me for another’s profit.
Peasant.

I ignored the insult and asked about the future, my client’s real interest.

“What will time tell?”

The Magic Mirror would not speak.

“You must answer – under fairy-tale law, a deal is a deal, even with peasants. I paid my money, I want my answer: what will time tell?”

Be careful.
Are you sure you
want to know?

“Yes! Answer me!”

You have been warned.
A Beast will be born in the desert,
beautiful, yet terrible to behold, and
in time, it will awaken to travel
to Bethlehem, and destroy all!

The words gradually faded from sight. What kind of answer was this, warmed-over Revelations? I knew that language from somewhere, but where? Was it true, or just a game? The mirror certainly was tricky. I had no money, but I still had plenty of questions. What was the Beast? When would it be born? Could it be stopped?

The more I thought about it, the less certain I was. I had traded a little cash and my peace of mind for some words floating in a mirror. The sign said to be careful and the mirror had warned me, too. I should never have asked that last question.

The only thing clear to me was that this was the real Magic Mirror, and it was too powerful for a hedge-fund manager to own. It needed to stay right where it was.

Being a finder of magical antiquities was dangerous. Even though fairy tales were nearly over and their magic almost gone, in some objects that magic lingered on to show us the power of imagination, and remind us of what we had lost.

I'd never quit a job before, and the decision stung, but leaving that mirror behind was the right thing to do. I went back to my car and got on the road toward Grantsville, instead.

I still had to find that dragon’s egg. I sure hoped this one wouldn’t hatch.

******************

Given the source of the topic (“Easter, 1916” http://www.online-literature.com/donne/779/), I included references to two other poems by William Butler Yeats:
“Sailing to Byzantium” http://www.online-literature.com/yeats/781/
“The Second Coming” http://www.online-literature.com/yeats/780/

Date: 2014-08-04 06:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bleodswean.livejournal.com
Whoa. A serious entry from you dressed in fairy tale frippery. (Although, truly, fairy tales are very serious archetypal business, aren't they?)

I LOVE this. It is superbly crafted and I know I keep saying this but your writing skill is impressive and expansive. Of course, the seasoning of humour here is so you and keeps the piece in your unique voice as well as keeping the reader entertained. You bring freshness to "one of the oldest tricks in fortune-telling" and that's always a hard trick. Your twist on the prompt is really well done - Cthulhu-like. Despite your wonderful lightness, this piece is so heavy.

I would read a small-ish novel starring your magical antiquities trader.

Date: 2014-08-05 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
A smallish novel is out of the question, because either (a) talent considerations; or (b) I already have plans for a trilogy, and then there will be the inevitable movie. Thank you, as ever, for your compliments. I thought I would try something a little more serious, but the weird kept creeping in.

Date: 2014-08-05 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adoptedwriter.livejournal.com
Great story! I especially liked the dialogue between the mirror and the treasure hunter. AW

Date: 2014-08-05 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
Thank you. I enjoyed writing the dialog.

Date: 2014-08-05 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karmasoup.livejournal.com
This sad little caravan is a bit of a tragedy, all these once great figures of our imagination reduced to begging for scraps in the rubble of their moving puppet show. I am surprised he decided to leave the mirror rather than taking it someplace safe to protect it, or the world from it... perhaps he felt it was in the space it could do the least harm.

Date: 2014-08-05 06:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
I thought about what to do with the mirror. I knew it couldn't go to the hedge-fund manager, but I decided that since it was a fairy tale object, it should stay with the Fairy-Tale Circus. Also, I wondered if it made sense for the circus to part with the mirror willingly. Thanks for the comment.

Date: 2014-08-05 06:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com
I really liked the combination of ideas that went into this, where even the Magic Mirror-- best known for its use by the evil queen in Snow White-- expresses the prompt. That queen really was a terrible beauty.

The mirror itself cracks me up, with its haughty comments (understandable, given its history) and its relentless use of the literal to outstrip the asker of his funds. Really, I think "Time will tell," isn't much of an answer either. It's kind of a bait-and-switch, designed to wipe out the next two questions!

Date: 2014-08-05 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zhent.livejournal.com
Excellent entry this week. Combining a bit of the modern with the fairy-tale was inspired!

Date: 2014-08-06 06:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jem0000000.livejournal.com
Oh dear -- something tells me it's going to.

Very nice -- I liked the fairy-tale references. :)

Date: 2014-08-06 01:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
Like all good fortunes, "time will tell" is ambiguous enough to cover just about anything, because time always will reveal the future eventually. From the point of view of the mirror, it's a great answer because it leads to more money. I'm glad you liked the mirror.

Date: 2014-08-06 01:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
Thank you. I like your icon.

Date: 2014-08-06 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed the fairy-tale parts. Thanks for commenting.

Date: 2014-08-06 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kajel.livejournal.com
Loved this!

Date: 2014-08-06 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
Thank you, especially for taking the time to comment.

Date: 2014-08-06 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lrig-rorrim.livejournal.com
This is awesome. I love the strange set-up, the bits of prophecy and snide commentary from the mirror, all of it. Wonderful!

Date: 2014-08-07 05:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tatdatcm.livejournal.com
What a sad story. Kind of like Little Jackie Paper and Puff the Magic Dragon.

You're magic treasure hunter sounds like a smart cookie. Well, when he's not falling for the oldest trick in the fortune telling business.

Date: 2014-08-07 05:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] uncawes.livejournal.com
It's never a good idea to ask about the future.
"Always in motion, it is" - or for the older folks "que sera, sera."

Well crafted tale of the dangers of working for hedge fund managers. That's my attempt at mixing the serious with the not so serious. Your entry did it much better

Date: 2014-08-07 12:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penpusher.livejournal.com
Great. I'm a sucker for the world weary gumshoe types and this one is a keeper. Nice framing and imagery and good use of the fairy tale back stories to color the palette.

Date: 2014-08-07 12:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to run together two different genres.

Date: 2014-08-07 12:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
Many thanks! I have yet to see anything positive about hedge fund managers. It would be challenging to write something like that. As one of the old folks, I also like "C'est la vie, say the old folk, it goes to show you never can tell" from Chuck Berry's "Teenage Wedding." "Que sera, sera" I recognize, of course, but my aging memory had trouble with "Always in motion, it is," despite Yoda's signature syntax.

Date: 2014-08-07 12:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
I hadn't thought about Puff the Magic Dragon, but you're right. The loss of imagination, whether from the ending of childhood or the advances of modern culture, is a sad business. Thank you for your comment.

Date: 2014-08-07 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
Thank you! It can be fun to put stuff in a blender, mix it up, and see what comes out. Of course, it isn't always drinkable, or readable, so I'm glad you liked this mixture.

Date: 2014-08-07 01:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shimmerdream.livejournal.com
This is a great entry. I never thought about the magic mirror's character before, but really like its voice here.

Date: 2014-08-07 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-17bingo.livejournal.com
Okay, three things:

1) The finder of magical antiquities is a fairy tale, but which one? Here's ten bucks. Answer me!

2) "You’re kidding! My last question?" made me laugh aloud.

3) This was a fantastic entry.

Date: 2014-08-07 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternal-ot.livejournal.com
Ha! Brilliant...Amazing take..Kudos yet again..:)

Date: 2014-08-07 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
Thank you. The magic mirror was fun to write.

Date: 2014-08-07 03:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
1. I didn't have any fairy tale in mind. I didn't know there was one about such a character. Do I still get the ten bucks?
2. Woohoo!
3. Woohoo again!
If you want a longer reply, it will cost you another $10, so think carefully about it.

Date: 2014-08-07 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
Thank you, and thank you for reading my other entries!

Date: 2014-08-07 03:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whipchick.livejournal.com
Great character, and I loved the slouching towards Bethlehem reference :)

You might be able to start with the second paragraph here, it might be more engaging and I think the info we need becomes clear.

Enjoyed this a lot!

Date: 2014-08-07 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
I had not thought about starting at the second paragraph, but after re-reading the opening, I see that you are right. That's a great suggestion. In the initial draft, the first paragraph was more important, and I should have jettisoned it later because of changes. I believe you once recommended a goal of 750 - 1,000 words (apologies if I am wrong), which I think is excellent for me and I keep it in mind while writing, although I clearly did not meet it here (1,297). Eliminating the first paragraph would have helped a lot. Thanks for your comment.

Date: 2014-08-07 08:22 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com
i recognized "the second coming" - what rough beast... slouches towards bethlehem to be born - and went "ooh! yeats!" and then "OF COURSE yeats >.< ". i like that you alluded to two other of his poems, rather than "easter, 1916". and the magical relics finder, he (or she?) is pretty fabulous, as is the mirror. the mirror's got that really great fairy-tale tendency to trick you and answer your question(s) without actually answering them, which i love. it's got kind of a snide personality. and i love that the relics finder has a lot of respect for all these magical artifacts, and is a pretty ethical professional.

Date: 2014-08-07 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked the mirror so much. With the prompt coming from "Easter, 1916," I thought it was only fair to include some other Yeats. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.

Date: 2014-08-07 11:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] n3m3sis43.livejournal.com
*snerk*

I know this was supposed to be serious (well, more serious), but it still amused me. And I think I find a mirror that quotes Yeats way more disturbing than a prophetic mirror, for whatever reason. XD

Date: 2014-08-09 11:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
It was a little bit serious and a little bit silly, but I'm glad you liked it. I'm sure a Magic Mirror would be well-read; after all, it spends almost all its time hanging on a wall with nothing to do.

Date: 2014-08-13 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jem0000000.livejournal.com
You're welcome.

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